In a yarn, a story of the bush told around a fire, it is
common for there to be many voices. One voice may start the story, telling what
the person knows. Others may take over and finish the story. While others may
question and probe the story with “what ifs” and “what happened before”.
This story is told that way – with the voice changing.
Initially, I start with two main voices, Pete and Anthem. To emphasise the
personal point of view, their names are not spoken until late in the work.
Towards the end of the story, other voices emerge, particularly Kathy.
Like the real world, none of the voices speak with knowledge
of the entirety. To find out what is going on, every voice must be heard, but
even then, not all will be revealed. In this sense, the yarn is a puzzle, and the interaction of voices the key to resolving it.
The below timeline - from earliest to latest - may help
place the story and voices into context.
Yellow Dragon lair
Kathy and Pete – refer to their past and how their came to have farms nearby
Bob meets the wraith Belle and they explore unstable area overlapping
Gliese 710 and Christchurch
Kathy – her discovery of alfs in her garden and dragons in
the forest nearby
Pete – stumbles across a dragon taking rainbow gold and
watches where the dragon goes
Kathy – tries to talk Pete out of following Dragon, and
instead follows him, with Storm, at a distance
Pete - enters Yellow Dragon lair, communicating with Anthem,
but suffers head injury
Pete – escapes lair with alfs and travels to spider realm in
Gliese 710
Kathy – watches the near disasters
Storm – Kathy sends Storm home
New Zealand
Pete – alfs hide Pete in unstable area overlapping Gliese 710 and Christchurch
Pete – wakes and talks to Anthem
Kathy – has also travelled to the unstable area, contacts
Storm.
Pete – to avoid Spiders, alfs genetically modify Pete and attempt
to escape
Anthem – directed to unstable area to assist investigations
into the events
Kathy - plans with Bob (and Belle) for a rescue.
Water world - Gliese 710
Anthem – plans rescue of Belle with Bob, alfs genetically modify
Anthem, travels to Gliese 710
Anthem – Bob, alfs and Anthem rescue Belle, wraiths, Pete
and alfs
Anthem – avoids genetic restoration, but increasingly becomes confused
Kathy – Bob and wraiths take Pete and Kathy into wraith zone
on Gliese 710
Anthem - Two years after entering the wraith zone, Anthem and Pete complete genetic modification to black dragon-kin and return to unstable area overlapping Gliese 710 and Christchurch
New Zealand/Australia
Anthem - Anthem is poisoned as she leaves the area and flees to the blue dragons lair with the intention of resetting the timeline
Onesti - At the same time, Pete is returned to his farm with memory block.
Anthem - One week later, is faced with the choice of pursuing uncertainty with resetting the time line or with Pete and Storm setting off to find Kathy.
New Zealand/Australia
Anthem - Anthem is poisoned as she leaves the area and flees to the blue dragons lair with the intention of resetting the timeline
Onesti - At the same time, Pete is returned to his farm with memory block.
Anthem - One week later, is faced with the choice of pursuing uncertainty with resetting the time line or with Pete and Storm setting off to find Kathy.
Peter Quinton
Palerang
March 2015
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